Inside Looking Out

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  1. Val Nathan

    Nice Don. The only sound at Thetis Lake yesterday afternoon was some asshole’s ghetto blaster. I longed for the sound of the trees.

  2. hellomyhoney

    Reblogged this on HelloMyHoney.

  3. I know we are all blogger’s that use technology as a medium to communicate our ideas, but this resonates with me. I hate the sound of nature being drawn out by our so called life improving technology.

  4. I like how this poem builds towards the end and then ends up being like one held breath while going “man do I really have to answer this thing?” I especially liked the images in the middle: from “multihued tones of leaves” to “maybe a duck”, which I found funny.

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